Even in such a diverse world, many
people share the same goal: happiness. Happiness is defined by Oxford
Dictionary as “the state of being happy”. Since this definition is vague, it
allows each individual to create their own definition of happiness based on
their personal experiences. Throughout my life, happiness has always been a
reachable goal that I set for myself in any new situation. My happiness is a
constant in an ever changing world. To me, happiness is a combination of many
things: the love and familiarity of my family, seemingly insignificant things
like the shining sun that make each day better, and the freedom to make my own
choices. My photos are arranged in the order in which I recognized the
happiness each aspect of my life has given to me. From a young age, I have
appreciated my family and the love they have for me. A few years ago, I
recognized my love for the outdoors and the sunshine, and the energy and
fulfillment it gives me. Only recently, as a new adult, am I grateful for the freedom
to make my own decisions and to live my life in a way that makes me happy.
#family #love
#familiarity #laughing #happiness
#sun #light #life
#rule of thirds #happiness
#freedom #individuality #expression #happiness
Grade breakdown:
ReplyDelete4/4 for intro (2 for framing a "feeling"; good rhetorical strategy of using a definition of "happiness" in the beginning of your introduction. You also do a good job of explaining the reason for the order in which you arranged these photos.) (& 2 for grammar/writing mechanics)
3/3 for photos (even though the photos are quite different from one another, all of them depict brightness and some sort of green or yellow hue, befitting of "happiness")
3/3 for hashtags
Total: 10/10
Letter Grade: A