I got some good suggestions on my
blog posts that I will take into consideration. One of my suggestions was to
get more variation in sentence structure. This is a good idea because I don’t
want every sentence to be set up the same way, and I want to add more interest
to my sentences. I also need to work on my transitions between paragraphs, so
that I provide a smoother flow from paragraph to paragraph.
There was one comment that I don’t
think I will use in my revisions. It was to use photos in my blog posts. My
posts are on the more academic side of the majority of the blogs, but I like
that it is more professional. I feel that adding photos will make my posts seem
more “fun”, but I am not really writing about a fun topic.
Overall, I got some helpful comments
on my posts that I think will make them better.
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